I feel post #1 is the best . I like how he refers to the article that was given he gives some supporting details he gives some reason and examples he compairs reason with facts. To a certain extent i have.I feel in the conclusion he gave a connection to the article but enough he gave how its affecting the world and the young but he could add how the reality show could be improved to help strengthin the mind set of the world and young to make the new generation stict to getting an education verses taking the easy wayout such as reality.
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